Wednesday 1 January 2020

SLJ week 1 day 5 #2

1 comment:

  1. Hey Bella!

    Well done retelling Yusra’s story! You did so well to include so much detail! I really love how you wrote so much!

    Swimming for three hours is such a long time! I cannot imagine being able to swim for so long. The longest I have probably swam for with no break is twenty minutes. What’s the longest you have ever swam for?

    You keep on impressing me with how good your posts are! Well done. Keep up this amazing work! I’m having so much fun reading everything your write.

    Matilda :)

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